SpaceX Launch Astronauts To Space!

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Article I had chosen: SpaceX Launch Astronauts to Space My Opinion: The article on Elon Musk's ambitious project is clean and concise with factual information. The author could have written more on SpaceX's vision of making space trips more affordable and common. I believe that talking about vision is more important these days than about a particular accomplishment since that gives more strength to the article and makes it more readable. 

       I presume talking about vision and dream is important, because unless we tap the emotional significance of any news or matter, we fail to keep the reader engaged with the article. There was little glitch in the launching on Wednesday and the launching got postponed to Saturday. Though this information is covered in the article, the reason and actual information are not well covered. 

        I believe this part is important because majority of the audience looking at this was skeptical about a private agency's competence in launching a rocket. SpaceX is unlike other space missions for various reasons. Cost-cutting, reusable rockets and precise technology makes SpaceX stand out. The extraordinary technology and talent responsible for this remarkable achievement needs some attention and that could have made the article more impressive.

Author : Shreenidhi Sharma 

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