Nature..

Here is my article....

      Mountains.. Waterfalls.. Greenery.. Nature.. The Combination of these four elements makes your holiday a perfect one. The article arises with the blooms and brightness of Western Ghats and reaches to the freshness of filter coffee of Karnataka. 

       I have pulled few of my thoughts on the article here. Firstly, the titles which have the positive wordings attract attention is my belief. The native kannadigas may have an emotion to sneak into it. But why would anybody who is unaware of Karnataka want to know the underrated holiday destinations.

       The sentence “The place gets a lot of rainfall and the hilly terrains carve out a perfect pavement for the rainwater to flow downhill”. This statement is beautifully penned and depicts the beauty of the nature.

       The article seems incomplete since only two destinations are mentioned. The reader may expect at least ten items in the listing.

The content under each subheading must have equal amount of content is my opinion.

       The second sentence of the introduction starts by saying “ hope………”. I feel that the article must present the certainty to the reader. So, the sentence could have been “These places will surely leave you awe-struck” .

      A sentence reads as “Lord Shiva hide in the cave”. It can be corrected as “Lord Shiva had to hide in the cave”.

      A Sentence says “You can visit Banavasi” But the sentence will be contextually correct when written as “ You can also visit Banavasi  which is another tourist attraction close by”.

      The article could have included the best period in the year to visit combining with the travel routes by road, rail and airways to make it a typical travel guide.

      To put in a nutshell the article has is as beautiful as the Yana hills but must have been more poetic with colorful descriptions to give a feel of those fabulous places.

Author : Sowmya TR

Opinion on Underrated Places in Karnataka!!! Part 1