Everything about MITRON, India based TIKTOK’s rivalry App
For being asked to write a review of an application, review sounded like an interesting assignment. I have few suggestions that have been listed below:
Title
A title is used to encourage the audience, in this case, the website traffic to catch the eye as fast as possible as they only get to scan through the topics. So, the shorter it is, the easier it is to identify amongst the sea of content.
An alternate title to me would be, “#TIKTOK Challenge (d): India’s Mitron”
The subtitles can also be more precise to understand what we, as audience, could expect in the forthcoming stanza. It gives us the chance to skip it if it is not relevant, which makes a visual person like me to take in the information without actually reading the entire article.
Reason:
The #TIKTOK Challenge is a trending hash tag that would automate many users to the website resulting in better traffic.
Grammar & Sentence Formation
The lack of punctuation marks and long sentences made me read it multiple times to comprehend the article.
Conclusion
The article is informative but it could have been more exciting as it is up to the writer to keep the reader engaged and make sure h/she comments on the thread given below. I also felt, the last line could have been used as an introduction to create an interest or as a reader’s bait rather than the end.
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